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Open Poetry #48

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ponderthepoetorrsx
Member

since 2011-06-25

Posts 284
U.S , Ca

0 posted 2013-09-30 10:39 PM

There's an apathetic feeling
that i can not
Quite understand.

Its chaos
A pandemonium
A maelstrom

Of emotion,
All of them.

Just at the tip
Of ones thoughts.

Its melancholic
Its frustrating
Insane!

Something that isn't,
But is!

Like a mind
Trying to imagine
Non existence.

So i sit here,
Tapping my foot,

There's an apathetic feeling
That i can not
Quite understand.

Richard

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

1 posted 2013-10-01 03:38 AM

Richard, I was drawn by the title as I wrote one with the same title a long time ago.
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Yes, the not understanding is something that is difficult to digest. I enjoyed your poem, though I am sad you are experiencing this.

Owl

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-10-01 08:48 AM

Frustrating, to say the least. Insanity to say the most.

~*~ I don't have to eat sarcasm to recognize the flavor. ~*~

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2013-10-02 12:43 PM

“Like a mind
Trying to imagine
Non existence.”

I enjoyed your thoughts within this piece very much Richard. A very intriguing read which left me pondering the many questions of life. Nicely done.

Best wishes,
/Kit

ponderthepoetorrsx
Member

since 2011-06-25

Posts 284
U.S , Ca

4 posted 2013-10-02 01:29 PM

I'm glad you enjoyed it

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