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the babbling narrator?
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the babbling narrator? |
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ponderthepoetorrsx Member
since 2011-06-25
Posts 284U.S , Ca |
When the reader Doesn't get the poem. And the author doesn't know! When the poem Doesn't get the reader. And the author doesn't know! Tis incompatibility complete A failure in communication! A misculculamacation! And the author doesn't know! So they squabble So they warble So they marvel So they marble! And the author doesn't know! So the poem goes to down to business And the reader goes up to visit And the author doesn't know! So they seek out a solution That the author doesn't know! so the reader and poem Go in to analytics And come out hand in hand! And the author knows too late! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Haha, this made me smile. It's really cute ... but I think that a poem speaks to every reader in a different way and not always the interpretation might come close to the author's intention. Does it matter? What matters is that the poem stirred the reader's interest and emanated an emotion somehow, that alone makes it always a success. I enjoyed your take on it anyway. Margherita |
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