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Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.

0 posted 2013-09-30 09:11 AM



My eyes gaze into
Those that have not changed
Though time has all else
Not the same
And once again
Our love remains
Through raging storm
And rocky shore

You’ve held me up
When soul does weep
I’ve reinforced you
With lovers strength
Sparks do fly
When equals meet
To withstand all
As disaster weeps


© Copyright 2002 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved

           Thank You
         ~~~Connie~~~

© Copyright 2013 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2013-09-30 09:41 AM


Intense. Yes, when equals meet, we cope much better all of life's challenges.

Enjoyed this.

Margerita

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2013-09-30 10:39 AM


When equals meet there is usually a battle to see which one is most equal. I liked this. You went through the gauntlet of living the life with another by your side.

~*~ I don't have to eat sarcasm to recognize the flavor. ~*~

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