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Open Poetry #48

we are extraordinary....

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2013-09-29 02:22 AM

We are extraordinary when we are in love,
the time changes the landscapes and we learn the clarinet,
the moon tells our loves the eyes which want to eat her,
we are extraordinary when we are in love.

Sometimes, even birds make nests in our hair,
we are extraordinary when we are in love,
we learn to laugh in the big houses,
and we cry by peeling the apples of gardens.

Then we write poems to amaze the butterflies,
we speak to the feet of the young ladies to make them dance,
sure of us, we unsettle the clocks they have in their heart,
we are extraordinary when we are in love.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2013-09-29 02:25 AM

Lovely, joyful poem, yann. I hope you are speaking from experience.
Ida

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2013-09-29 06:17 AM

This is absolutely delightful, Yann.

Owl

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2013-09-29 07:59 AM

Then we write poems to amaze the butterflies

Dear Yann, this is an exquisite, beautifully creative write. And the above affirmation will stick to me forever I guess, it's sooooooo lovely!

Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2013-10-08 10:19 PM

a pleasure to read...James

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