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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2013-07-31 07:20 PM

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The green tops
Of those summer trees
Are still

The sky
Is a cloudy blue
I feel no urge
To move

Doing nothing
Using my own eyes
Taking in
The waning hour

And you’re there
Though not of course
In any great detail

A soul distilled
From all that never
Ever really mattered

How beautiful
You are in this dusk light
Gazing back
From where you are

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2013-07-31 11:05 PM

Gorgeous poem.... indeed your words shine so bright and compliment her own special star.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2013-08-02 10:38 AM

Awesome write, John.
Ida

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2013-08-08 10:19 AM

quite an interesting 'penning' indeed!

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

4 posted 2013-08-08 10:46 AM

reminds me of my memories, soft lulling.

Beautifully penned.

RS

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2013-08-08 10:58 AM

Touchingly beautiful, John.

Margherita

Namyh
Senior Member

since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

6 posted 2013-08-08 05:24 PM

Huan Yi - Sometimes it's just so very nice to be transfixed by a moment that soaks you in. It takes the poet to put it in words. Much enjoyed. Namyh

MorningStar
Member

since 2009-10-26

Posts 290
Pittsburgh, Pa

7 posted 2013-08-09 12:05 PM

How beautiful this is...

"I'll tell you how the sun rose
A ribbon at a time..." - Emily Dickinson

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

8 posted 2013-08-09 07:30 PM

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Thank you all
more than you can know

John

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Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

9 posted 2013-08-12 09:46 PM

I like this one; I read it a few times and each time new thoughts came to mind.

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2013-10-08 04:11 PM

Dear John,
I am very sad as I have just read Essorant's post saying that you have moved on ... this poem of yours is truly most poignant also imagining you now in the light too ...

Love and Peace and Light.
Margherita

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