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Open Poetry #48

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Inspired-8
Member

since 2008-04-14

Posts 311
Pluto

0 posted 2013-09-25 02:48 AM

Why these tears never end
Spilling from wounds of deep
Fragments of heart to never mend
Abandoned to forever weep

Why did yesterday now faraway
Leave its images vivid in mind
Remorse ...regret ceaseless portray
Dreams of heart that only blind

Reliving moments past now constant
Try to forget and move on
Entangled within forever haunted
Awaken to discover all that is gone

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2013-09-25 06:07 AM

Dear Victor, you tug at my heartstrings with your touching poem! And yet ... we always must try to move on, to bless the past and let it go, because we deserve a full life NOW.

Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-09-25 08:28 AM

I've relived those moments past far too long, and I now realize it was wasted self-loathing. I found a way to move on with my life, hope you can do the same.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

3 posted 2013-09-25 07:11 PM

agreeing with JPat, but the poem is touching in its intensity of that pain

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