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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2013-09-24 08:32 AM



orange peeks and streaks
darkness of the dawning sky
beauty begins the day
LGR(C)9/24/13

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2013-09-24 08:45 AM


Upbeat, optimistic and lovely Haiku. Beautiful words for a beautiful new beginning.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2013-09-24 08:51 AM


That's how I was feeling this morning in the shower when it came to me.

~L

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3 posted 2013-09-24 11:40 AM


Dawn, good time for haiku.

Really no bad time for haiku.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2013-09-24 01:07 PM


Thanks Krawdad,
I have to agree with you on that one!

~L

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5 posted 2013-09-25 06:36 AM


I love it, dear Lori, it's exquisite. I adore dawn too.

Margherita

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2013-09-25 02:49 PM


I never thought I would live to see the day I'd be getting up in time to see the dawn because I wanted too.  I guess that is what people do as they get older.
I'm glad you liked it!

Lori

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7 posted 2013-09-28 03:32 AM


Beautiful!
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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8 posted 2013-09-28 04:25 PM


Thanks Denise!

Lori

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