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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2013-09-18 07:00 AM

I poured my heart out
on you in my caresses
but you didn't feel
my tears fall
upon you as you slept
My lips couldn't kiss
your skin deep enough
to satisfy my longing
for that lost look
that special touch
you had for me
I held you close
until you began
to twitch and jerk
in your dreams
It was as if
my loving touches
brought you nightmares
I poured my heart out
for you on my pillow
so you wouldn't hear
my tears fall
for you as you slept
LGR(C)9/18/13

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-09-18 07:09 AM

Sad to the nth, Lori.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2013-09-18 07:18 AM

Thanks for the read Jerry

Lori

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2013-09-18 10:17 AM

Very, very touching (pardon the pun).

A

poetically ghetto
Member

since 2004-01-20

Posts 100

4 posted 2013-09-18 12:42 PM

this was a very powerful write full of emotion and longing I really felt these words and I am not easily touched thank you for reminding me of what love takes

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2013-09-19 08:40 AM

Alison, I'm a very punny person myself, there is nothing to pardon. Thanks for the read and kind words.

Lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2013-09-19 08:42 AM

Eric, thank you for your kind words and reminding me I'm not asking too much.

Lori

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2013-09-21 06:38 PM

very nice...James

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

8 posted 2013-09-21 07:01 PM

I understand your pain, Lori, more than you know.

Hugs
Owl

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

9 posted 2013-09-21 08:27 PM

this really comes across the page in the deepest spot where the heart feels that loss
where love once lived
sad, but good

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

10 posted 2013-09-22 09:51 AM

Thanks James as always

~L

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

11 posted 2013-09-22 09:53 AM

Owl,
Thanks for the read sweetie, sorry you can relate to this one.

~L

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

12 posted 2013-09-22 09:59 AM

Emma,
Tragic but true, I believe love still lives here, it is just locked in a dungeon wasting away waiting to be rescued while we argue over who lost the key to the dungeon door.

~L

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