Open Poetry #48 |
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Love Lifted Me |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana ![]() |
my happiness grows and grows I'd never felt this way before it's as if the heavens were all aglow for . . . when I saw her oh, I wanted more my heart felt as though it would burst, n'er before had I felt such emotion I longed for her arms to be my early morning dove I've said the words I love you many times before but now when I say it the cadence of my voice is strong with meaning and brings tears to my eyes when the wind blows it whispers her name where the leaves fall into the river and floats down to me I pluck it from the bayou caress it smell her scent oh yes, she is a woman ahhh, but much more than that she gives the earth its vibrancy and me my everything love when I speak it she snuggles close to me (c)September 12, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (09-12-2013 03:36 PM).] |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Ahh, my friend I could sit and read your love poems and eat chocolate all day long! You are a world class sweet talker Jerry. Lori ![]() |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Like a lover, the river wind. Hmmmm.... Gotta love the romance!! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Lori, but I'm just a would-be poet, sure not in the world class category. ~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Appreciate it Blues, you're sweet. ~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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poetically ghetto Member
since 2004-01-20
Posts 100 |
what a romantic tribute it was a pleasure to read |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, poetically ghetto, I do so appreciate your comments. ~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...and good...James |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks James. ~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
heavenly !! and o so warm and comfy ![]() |
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