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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY 
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and I spent months tearing down your walls only to be broken by your nothingness I know now why your walls were immaculate because you loved me loved me enough to let me go even if it destroyed you and left you with nothing except your walls built with love held together by your need to keep me out and away from what we created nothingness deep within you created by love we could never share and I spent months tearing down your walls only to find nothing within myself. -Trina |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
We built walls and obstacles throughout the love entanglements in order to hide away certain past histories. Sometimes these walls are overloaded to such an extent the crash and burn. ~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Damn, "be careful what you wish for" comes to mind in reading this. As a profound erecter of walls I have to say, they are usually built for a reason; though you certainly aren't the first to find this out the hard way. When walls come down, they tend to do a lot of damage, and usually much more to the would-be rescuer than to the one who built them in the first place. This because expectation lies only on one side. Michael |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Sometimes its those walls that protect my sanity....or what's left of it haha -Trina |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Trina!! Good to read you again! I can so relate! I don't want to talk about it. You just nailed it girlie! Lori  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice...almost cries out for one titled "everything"...James |
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poetically ghetto Member
since 2004-01-20
Posts 100 |
very impressed with this read I could feelit penetrating me from deep within a pleasure for sure and so much emotion |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
sometimes it's too much work to love  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wow! Powerful, deep and moving write, my friend. Never thought it could possibly happen to me ... but I know your Nothing well today, if just a little bit different than you. Much enjoyed. j. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
two edge sword...risk or push away... I wasn't going to say a whole lot while I was visiting my old home of blue...but this touched me. really well written in every way. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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