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RMW
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0 posted 2013-11-14 04:05 PM


An Attack of Heart

Intermittent
now
the tracks lead up
though with a look of use
sufficient.
Elk
frighten with their size
in death
they pack out hard.
I check my pulse,
two fingers laid aside my juggler,
not wanting to give up
yet
either the dark that waits
in down timber
or the woman's scent
beside the fire.

RMW

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2013-11-19 09:27 PM


nice writing...James
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2013-11-19 09:49 PM


Bob, reminiscent of a video of young elk and man seen recently; thank you for this. Thank you for seeing it through.

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2013-11-21 12:01 PM


Shivered in the view. Well done!
RMW
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4 posted 2013-11-21 12:04 PM


Thank you, All, for the kind words. Bob
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