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Open Poetry #48

Imperishable Love

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2013-09-01 03:13 PM

      Imperishable Love

Step beyond the crimson
long-shadow sunset
and  gentle evening twilight
into this ancient forest
world of untouched
resplendent elegance,
where the moon wears a
fine midnight-velvet cloak
of free-floating clouds,
drifting galaxies, and
‘Deep-Time’ dreams
in a vast-eternal sky
as clear as the mind
and heart that sing
a wilderness melody,
with spirit in harmony,
of transience, truth,
enlightenment,
penultimate freedom,
joy, and imperishable
   love.

                 --- b. e. adams (9/1/2013)

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-09-01 03:53 PM

You write of your surroundings with a freedom within your words which are a godsend, Bruce. You give us a heaven on earth.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (09-02-2013 03:33 PM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2013-09-01 11:07 PM

Yes, I agree with Jerry. Seeing the world through your eyes is a blessing.

Lori

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2013-09-01 11:48 PM

Thanks Jerry and Lori for your most kind comments on this my latest ever-so-humble lil' "poetic scribble!" ...

I hope that I give fair 'voice' to both Romanticism and the ever-vanishing wilderness (two
things, I believe, that this double-post-modern world needs rather more not less of?!)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2013-09-04 10:24 PM

Fine writing...James

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

5 posted 2013-09-09 09:09 AM

you paint wonderful pictures that we see, but cannot always express with such reverence for life and love

poetically ghetto
Member

since 2004-01-20

Posts 100

6 posted 2013-09-10 04:00 AM

your passion in your writing is an invitation to your soul. your technique is true to the heart and well formed enjoyed it much

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