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Open Poetry #48

gong through the motions

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

0 posted 2013-09-01 02:51 PM

I think it's rather funny
I think it's quite a joke
the twisted turns of words of honey
the way you prodded and poked

I think it is quite funny
rather quite unreal
chasing the wise bunny
round the rabbits wheel

and don't you think it is ironic
like tossing a two sided coin
head's up now you know
that tails never win

going through the motions
another page torn from the past
living in a dream filled castle
chasing dreams that never last

~~~kingsangel~~~

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-09-01 03:50 PM

Yes, Angel4aKing, that is the way it is in far too many cases. Sad to say I resembled the other part of this poem in those two lost decades. You spoke with clarity and your words were riveting.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

2 posted 2013-09-02 02:22 PM

dream chasing is just that

your poem brings it back to haunt those of us dream chasers

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

3 posted 2013-09-02 05:35 PM

Be careful chasing dreams,might turn round n become nightmares that bite quite hard,well written.

Enjoyed thank you.

GR

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