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Open Poetry #48

Don't Think

Amberzlynnc
Member

since 2010-08-24

Posts 229
New Jersey

0 posted 2013-08-27 10:29 PM

Your smile is intoxicating,
saturating my bed with nervous sweating.

I want to be more than the next on your list
of pretty necks kissed
Of heads buried in pillows without faces
Of flesh that’s consumed but not tasted

Experience, experiment
Don’t move too slow, just fast enough
Don’t think too much

I can change expressions on your face
but not obsessions on your mind
Your words dance on my chest
I do my best not to let them sink in

Experience, experiment
Don’t move too slow, just fast enough
Don’t think too much

I want to be more than the next on your list
of pretty necks kissed
Of heads buried in pillows without faces
Of flesh that’s consumed but not tasted

-Amber

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2013-08-28 07:34 PM

Like this...James

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

2 posted 2013-08-29 02:36 PM

feeling and intelligence in this poem

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

3 posted 2013-08-30 07:08 AM

I absolutely adore this. Although, I do have to stop and think occasionally

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2013-08-30 10:26 AM

Haha! Have to laugh at s1nfully_1nn0c3nt's remark. Still, I hear what you are saying. Let it come natural, "don't think too much."

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