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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2013-08-25 07:41 AM

I breathe necessary breath
to continue to live
breath is merely breath
which will surely cease to be
but what I say
especially what I write
is immortal

(c)August 9, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ What do you call a dinosaur with a extensive vocabulary? A thesaurus. ~*~

crosscountry83
Member

since 2009-07-30

Posts 345

1 posted 2013-08-25 09:00 AM

Well said. This poem is timeless.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-08-25 10:42 AM

Thanks, CC, I see you have something posted, I'm on it.

~*~ What do you call a dinosaur with a extensive vocabulary? A thesaurus. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2013-08-25 11:10 AM

I never thought of it quite like that my friend and you are quite right. Immortal they may be....I just hope thay not all MY word won't be irrevelant. I know yours haven't been to me.

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2013-08-25 11:35 AM

Lori, your poems will be sitting right alongside mine in the Immortal Bin, never fear. Thank you for being here.

~*~ What do you call a dinosaur with a extensive vocabulary? A thesaurus. ~*~

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

5 posted 2013-08-25 12:45 PM

Ah, and such is the power of the pen. A nice piece to start my day with. Thanks, jer.

Michael

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2013-08-25 12:56 PM

Thanks much, Michael. "Tis true, you know, our words will live on, yours especially.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

7 posted 2013-09-01 08:31 PM

yes indeed
I second that

sentiment of yours

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2013-09-02 08:35 AM

Thanks, Emma, and good morning to you.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

9 posted 2013-09-03 02:40 AM

Short and to the point. Love it.

-Trina
I'll keep these dreams hidden
inside these eyes of mine
until my tears fall
unto my tainted hear

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

10 posted 2013-09-03 08:00 AM

Thank you so much Trina.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

11 posted 2013-09-04 05:26 AM

I believe you are right, Jerry.
Ida

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

12 posted 2013-09-04 07:09 AM

Good Morning Ida, and thank you very much for your comment.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

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