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The Ebb and Glow
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The Ebb and Glow |
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paderewski Member
since 2011-02-04
Posts 287Louisiana, USA |
its in mans genes, DNA where he has grown ready to procreate consuming much of his time on the how and maybe of it it is his seed he boldly offers fertilization the mysterious womb of life to give when the rigid thought process becomes turgid and severely bent out of shape straining with midnight's itch taking pride charming the woman flower diluting passions flow into the walls of heaven the walls close around the intruder craving the touch of the life giver ahhh . . . there are a few things which cause us to ponder some are . . . the ways of the birds in the sky a tongue flicking, tail rattling diamondback rattlesnake a roiling, boiling ocean but best of all are the look in a woman's eyes moments before entry (c)August 20, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ Haunted French pancakes give me the crepes. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Your last lines say it all. Lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Lori, I'm glad you liked it, and yes, the last few lines was what it was all about. ~*~ What do you call a dinosaur with a extensive vocabulary? A thesaurus. ~*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
This is as passionate as it gets, Jer. Enjoyable read. Michael |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Heh.Heh Thanks Michael. ~*~ What do you call a dinosaur with a extensive vocabulary? A thesaurus. ~*~ |
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