Open Poetry #48 |
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Song of Ourselves |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! ![]() |
Song of Ourselves On this grand immortal moon-bright night of floating clouds and weightless dreams, in this place of song and sorrow where wandering hearts come to speak with the the wind and ancestral spirit-shadows of these ancient woods to transcend for a moment our smallness and the careworn anthem of ourselves; why must we call the apparent distance between our souls and the stars ‘reality,’ for our hearts are our true compasses on the universal sea of energy and consciousness with which we are one. --- b. e adams [(the 'accidental' Buddhist) 8/17/2013] |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
So in tune with my own way of thinking and beautifully stated. Ida |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thanks Ida! ... however, since typically very few folks comment on my humble lil' 'scribblings,' it is most likely well past the time for me to depart this scene. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"why must we call the apparent distance between our souls and the stars ‘reality," Because we're born with half a brain! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poetry is uplifting and full of hope. I read your reply and more times than not I try to leave a kind word for you....rarely is my reply acknowledged by you....I'm sorry you feel you don't get enough feedback...its pretty quiet around here these days but your writing is always beautiful. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
thank you each ... for commenting on this 'write!' ... |
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