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Open Poetry #48

waiting relief

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

0 posted 2013-08-04 07:20 PM

In dire need, a pocked
marked field where crimson
ruled, is scant in voice with
alms for the afflicted, begs
for pardon of her parching as
noon time skies in cloud express
stack in volumes, pretty blocks of
greys and whites, connected

but sky won't cry
her tears just yet,
rainclouds brew and gift
the eye with beauty
in the domes of drops, that stall
a bit to the dismay
of life below that waits relief,
as beauty strays for those in need,
temporarily neglected

[This message has been edited by EmmaRose (08-06-2013 07:23 AM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2013-08-04 11:32 PM

This is lovely! Wonderful discriptions!

Lori

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2013-08-05 07:57 PM

Your thought process is intriguing..and your expression so unique

Lovely poem, Emma...

swampguy
Member

since 2013-08-04

Posts 83

3 posted 2013-08-06 09:10 AM

THIS is exquisite, Emma.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~*~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2013-08-21 10:40 PM

Very nice...James

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