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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2013-08-07 10:49 PM


Walking In the Sky

I watched her walking by
her high heels so high
she seemed to be walking
in the sky,
she ask me
what I was looking at
I told her
whatever I could
she turned and walked
towards me
and she was looking
absolutely good.
She was at least
as tall as me
but her heels
raised her higher
from her position
she captured
my attention
and spiced up
my desire.

JamesLee
07August
2013

  


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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2013-08-07 10:53 PM


I'll bet they did too!

Lori

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
2 posted 2013-08-07 10:55 PM


yes indeed ... fine 'slice of life' impressionism! (reminds me of the old Roy Orbison song)
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