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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2013-08-01 03:11 PM


       Universal Symmetry

In the grand-immortal moments
just before the gentle dawn
when the forest world is still
bathed in perfect moonlight,
and the stars play a ‘Deep-Time’
symphony in resonance with
our souls and all our loveliest
hopes and dreams that dance
along the pathways of eternity
forever free and traceless,
the mind, heart, and spirit
are cleansed to crystal purity
until only the finest thoughts
and memories of love remain.
It is then we become fully real,
limitless, and one in perfect
symmetry with the consciousness
  of the universe.

                --- b. e. adams (8/1/2013)



© Copyright 2013 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2013-08-01 05:59 PM


quote:
symmetry with the consciousness
  of the universe.

Would that we all could become as one with the universe, these petty problems of the world would be no more. Good write, Bruce.

~*~ What do you call a dinosaur with a extensive vocabulary? A thesaurus. ~*~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2013-08-01 10:26 PM


Your poety is so peaceful and serene, your words dance with grace in such a an elegant way.

Enjoyed very much...dp.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2013-08-05 02:26 AM


Magical in it's ethereal beauty, Bruce.
                                Ida

Shirley Knott
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since 2013-08-05
Posts 9
state of confusion
4 posted 2013-08-05 06:10 PM


b.e. What a wonderful vision! I like how descriptive you are.
SEK

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