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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2013-08-01 01:32 AM

Tonight
we ran.

We ran our hands through the wind,
and braided the night.
The satellites blink like fireflies,
the stars blend and melt in the sky.

Tonight
we sang.

We sang old songs we thought we had forgotten,
and we rewrote them until they blurred
into the thin line between our voices
and the faded cricket chirps.

Tonight
the cool air felt like the touch of autumn,
and we ran

we ran right through it.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-08-01 06:38 AM

Yes. Oh yes indeed. Back drop feeling take us there as did you in this wonderful poetic offering.

~*~ What do you call a dinosaur with a extensive vocabulary? A thesaurus. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2013-08-01 11:44 AM

ooooh that felt & smelt so good! It was cozy and exhilarating at the same time. I really enjoyed that. Thank you for sharing it.

Lori

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2013-08-01 12:23 PM

This one wound me round right back to my teen years. Lovely writing, Meghan.

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

4 posted 2013-08-01 07:39 PM

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This is very good

John

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2013-08-01 10:17 PM

This is so freeing....beautiful you.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2013-08-02 10:44 AM

Love the depth and freshness of this, Kaoru.
Ida

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

7 posted 2013-08-02 01:39 PM

I love the heart and soul of this,of you

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

8 posted 2013-08-02 04:38 PM

Exquisite, Kaoru.

Owl

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2013-08-07 10:29 PM

enjoyed...James

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