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Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2013-07-31 03:40 PM

She touched her leg that night
with the left scar alongside her thigh
with her eyes falling down towards the western wind
and the basic fall of her dress that gently tucked
under the forest of trees that became the soft right side
of wind; settled onto lips of tipped ice
in rows
crossing along the field
December.

Under her breath
she fell below the skies sadden suns eyes
so she touched her brothers hair
his wavy curls once young,

Beauty,
brunette hair,
polished off the skim of the cows white, seasoned fur
running just past her shoulder blades
sensual
such grace,
wind tripped over its draft

So she often came home
crying; her room wallowing
and a small boy couldn't understand
so she sat alone
while she faced the mirrors hardened tears.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

1 posted 2013-07-31 05:54 PM

Tomer, you paint sadness so deeply, sensitively and tremor-beautifully that it scrapes the marrow of the bones of your readers.

Owl

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

2 posted 2013-08-01 12:36 PM

Owl,

Thanks for the beautiful comments. Happy you enjoyed and felt the anguish.

Cheers

Tomer

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2013-08-13 10:32 PM

enjoyed...James

swampguy
Member

since 2013-08-04

Posts 83

4 posted 2013-08-14 07:28 AM

There are some whose pain and suffering merits a poem. This is one of those.

~*~ The heart does not go backward, only the mind. ~*~

Rama
New Member

since 2013-08-16

Posts 2

5 posted 2013-08-17 12:14 PM

That was beautiful. Glad I stumbled upon it by chance.

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

6 posted 2013-08-26 02:41 PM

James-

Happy you enjoyed. Thanks for the compliment.

Cheers

Tomer

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

7 posted 2013-08-26 02:42 PM

Swamp-

Appreciate the support. Take care.

Cheers

Tomer

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

8 posted 2013-08-26 02:43 PM

Rama-

Happy you enjoyed. Thank you for the kind words.

Cheers

Tomer

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