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Some Lovers |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Some lovers say they feel close even when apart Some lovers keep right on going as if they were together Some lovers pine for their love when they are apart Some lovers lose who they are when half of them is gone. LGR(C)7/29/13 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You really know how to put the hook into your last stanza's Lori. This is a prime example. ~*~ Did you hear about the cross eyed teacher who lost her job because she couldn't control her pupils? ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
That is what I like about poetry...you don't have to put worms on those hooks!!  Thanks Jerry Lori |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed your thoughts on love...I think its nice to think about them when they're gone but much nicer to have the one you love as close as possible...James |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I hear you there. Sometimes it seems you can't get them close enough. Lori  |
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