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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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South Louisiana

0 posted 2013-07-26 06:49 AM

This poem is for you
And it will be the same
The years cannot alter
Loving you is my aim
Nothing will ever change
Even though I am dead
You're my absolute world
My love never unsaid

©June 22, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2013-07-26 07:09 AM

Hardcore love and devotion dude! She has really been under your skin lately. Glad you are happy camper. Good morning my friend.

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-07-26 07:11 AM

Good morning, Lori. Yeah, she is there alright. Appreciate you being here.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2013-07-26 08:35 AM

succinct and effective !

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2013-07-26 11:01 AM

Thanks, Bruce.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2013-07-26 11:21 PM

There is something about a poem
when it has the word
"you" in it.

Everyone believes it is for
them.

Good job, m'friend.

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

6 posted 2013-07-27 07:24 AM

I love this poem, Jerry!
Thank you for sharing )

Gale
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since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

7 posted 2013-07-27 07:38 AM

"There is something about a poem
when it has the word
"you" in it.

Everyone believes it is for
them."

No, Sunshine, I don't believe that "you" in anybody's poem is for me, especially in love poems!
But I think that it's for "something" in me, as well as in everyone, who can relate to the message! Since we can feel and understand it to some degree, it's for God in us, isn't it?
Even if we are not addressees, we are wires

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2013-07-27 08:05 AM

I guess you are right to some degree, Karilea, and sometimes I use "she," but for the life of me I just couldn't do it this time. Thanks for chiming in.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

9 posted 2013-07-27 08:06 AM

Thanks Gale. You have pretty much hit on it when you said it is the spiritual side of "you" that chooses to interpret the 'you" so personally. Thank you for being here.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Gale
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since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

10 posted 2013-07-27 04:27 PM

Shakespeare often used "you" in his sonnets, but I never imagined that he wrote to me

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

11 posted 2013-07-27 04:28 PM

Hah! I hear you, Gale, not too many do I'm thinking.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

12 posted 2013-07-28 07:14 PM

All as it should be. I really like this one, Jer.

Michael

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

13 posted 2013-07-28 07:24 PM

Thank you, Michael, your comments are appreciated.

~*~ Did you hear about the cross eyed teacher who lost her job because she couldn't control her pupils? ~*~

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