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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2013-07-24 06:51 AM

To see you smile
without the pall of worry
To see that burden off your brow
To hear you breathe
without curses on your breath
To hear you say
where you been
what you did
not what all you got to do
To smell your sweet refreshed
instead of toil and sweat
To smell my favorite aftershave
after you get home
is worth you going away for awhile
to your favorite vacation place
is worth all those kisses I get
to plant on your face
As we both say
“I missed you”

LGR(C)7/24/13

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-07-24 07:08 AM

Absence makes the heart . . . Well you know. I understand what you're saying.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2013-07-24 07:15 AM

Good morning friend! Yes, it does. I told him he better go and have a good time and come back rested and rejuvinated otherwise he might as well stay home.

Lori

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2013-07-25 07:32 AM

This is very tender and yes it is so true, that a separation every now and then has usually very positive and enjoyable effects.

Very nice.

Margherita

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2013-07-25 07:45 AM

Margherita, I believe you are right. This vacation to Sturgis we usually take just him and I (no kids) and other friends we camp with. It is a special time for us. So not only will I miss him but also that time away together. It' be easier if he was going on a business trip. Bottom line always is coming home safe and sound.

Lori

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2013-07-26 11:17 PM

Your writing is improving with time
love, missing, kissing, hating,
loving all of it....

Yes...your writing

is.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2013-07-27 07:24 AM

Well thank you very much I take that as high praise indeed Karilea!

Lori

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

7 posted 2013-07-27 07:47 AM

Lovely and true, Lori!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

8 posted 2013-07-27 08:21 AM

Thanks Gale, I'm delighted you liked it!

Lori

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

9 posted 2013-07-27 12:50 PM

Lovely write. Brought a smile to my face this morning. .. warm fuzzies even.

Michael

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

10 posted 2013-07-28 09:46 AM

Can't beat a warm fuzzy first thing in the morning unless it is a hot and caffenated

Lori

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