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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2013-07-23 07:46 AM



I am your moon
in slow orbit around you
I show off my milky white light
to your nocturnal existence
to soothe and intrance you
In my dawn setting I
call for you to rise
and join me for a bit
of coffee and contentment.


LGR(C)7/23/13

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2013-07-23 09:37 AM


Beautifully said, Lori, you always give so much of yourself.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2013-07-23 09:43 AM


Thanks Jerry, what else do I have to give?

Lori

EmmaRose
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3 posted 2013-07-23 11:22 AM


thanks for the morning moon to acompany my
morning java, a nice wakeup

Gale
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4 posted 2013-07-23 12:40 PM


Very nice, Lori!
Tenderly written!
I don't know if you want to be the moon, but it sounds like you don't mind )

One moment: sooth or soothe?

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2013-07-23 04:54 PM


Thanks EmmaRose!

I'm glad you like it


Lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2013-07-23 04:56 PM


Gale thanks for catching that!!!

Lori  

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7 posted 2013-07-30 09:11 PM


Oh yes, beautiful thoughts, there is a mellowness that lingers here.


Lori Grosser Rhoden
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8 posted 2013-07-30 10:00 PM


Thanks Blues I'm honored to have you here.

Lori  

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9 posted 2013-07-31 12:45 PM


I felt the contentment
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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10 posted 2013-07-31 07:01 AM


Yes! Mission accomplished! Bless your heart for letting me know!


Lori  

EmmaRose
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11 posted 2013-08-02 09:31 AM


sounds like the moon is doing overtime for you keeping your morning full in her face
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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12 posted 2013-08-02 07:31 PM


You got it Emma! Thanks!

Lori  

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