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Open Poetry #48

kissed by Bliss

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

0 posted 2013-07-20 03:49 PM

inspired by bliss
enticed by an
angels kiss

emptying sorrows
on your back porch
opening the eyes
and lighting the torch

you tell me it's not tragic
as you work me with your magic

a whole new world belongs to you
as we get wise to what they do.....

~~~kingsangel~~~

[This message has been edited by Angel4aKing (07-20-2013 04:34 PM).]

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

1 posted 2013-07-20 04:35 PM

Had to edit this one a couple of times but I think it finally has my approval....that's the trouble with writing in real time ... nothing is ever on paper first ....

~~~kingsangel~~~

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-07-20 04:53 PM

It certainly has my approval, Angel4aKing. My absolute favorite two lines are . . .

quote:
you tell me it's not tragic
as you work me with your magic

Those lines tell the tale of millions of romances and they never become tiresome, but you said them in a unique way..

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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