Open Poetry #48 |
When I'm Gone - in memory of 1slick_lady, Helen May Chambers |
Sunshine
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When I'm Gone When I never write again you shall not even know I am gone, not for long ~ no, and I am not wrong, you'll not know it, when I'm gone. When I never write again, can't imagine the where or when, but if it should happen, then, won't be for long ~ no, and I am never wrong... for I have a beautiful dream you see, of writing in calligraphy ~ for a scribe of God is what I'll be... and I am not wrong, you'll not know it when I am gone. For in your dreams I'll come to you and softly muse you with a song or two, leading your fantasies to sway away, to guide you in your dreams this day ~ no, you'll not know it when I am gone. If, for a moment, you seem alone seek the Sun then you shall see a brilliant little reminder of me, strong enough to melt the stone, yes, and I am not wrong… you'll not know it when I am gone. ~*~ 01.05.01 revised 08.08.02 |
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Lady Goodman Member
since 2012-10-04
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not KNOW? *smile* The power went out--in my room only. And yeah, I know, sometimes a tripped breaker is just a tripped breaker, but the timing was actually ...trippy. ? OH. You'd have to know why that's weird. Our last conversation...she was taking me to task about getting my ass out of bed. Point made, Helen. Very cute. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
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Posts 35113Canada eh. |
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Sunshine
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Lady G - Louise does it all the time to me...our Bridget Shenachie, that was once here at PiP...so if you had a daily connection with our Helen, do know, it shall be so, and smile with her, each and every time. I wish you...better health. Sunshine |
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Lady Goodman Member
since 2012-10-04
Posts 193 |
Didn't mean to go on about me. (mine is just a quarterly nuisance) just one of the many things she and I went on about--we shared the same sardonic humor about life's little nasties as well. The stories! The laughter through tears... I will hear her voice forever... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Remembering dear Helen through your poignant words, dear Karilea. Yes, there are the dreams that make it seem as if no separation has occurred. It's a gift, so precious. Love, Margherita |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So very touching to read this, and to understand. Hugs! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Beautiful Karilea.... No words. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
sad. |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
such a sweet and tender poet; I will miss her |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
very touching -Juju |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I have so much to say but I'll just keep it brief... this was very touching. Beautiful. |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
So sorry to hear of a poetess's passing. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well, I have no favorites on this subject - other than Helen of course. I think it's wonderful that everyone is writing to/for/about her, and beautifully so . . . so I'm just going to add this to everyone's piece so you'll know I was here, read, and experienced again, the tears for her... jimmy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's just too much to bear now |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
To not know and still remember. There's the ache. Thank you Karilea for such a thoughtful recall. |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
her tender words live on here, she was a blessing to us all |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Miss her. Lovely tribute. Ida |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
This is beautiful. -Trina |
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