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Open Poetry #48

I Need You

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2013-07-17 11:48 AM

I need you
Can't you see
Just like love songs say

Everything I do
is because of you

You're the other half of me
I depend on you to be

I call it being in love
Some call it
co-dependency

LGR(C)7/17/13

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

1 posted 2013-07-17 11:50 AM

A very touching piece, Lori!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-07-17 12:35 PM

I couldn't agree with Gale any more. Love it.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2013-07-17 01:10 PM

Yes, it's all that and more. It feels good to say it, just as you do here so beautifully.

Margherita

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2013-07-17 02:06 PM

Gale, JP and Margherita,
Thank you all for your kind comments on this poem. I appreciate it very much.

Lori

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2013-07-17 10:05 PM

Very nice...James

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2013-07-18 01:41 PM

Thank you kindly James!

Lori

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