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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Or So Those sunny days that caused such pause in squinted gaze at loose faux pas of clothing skimped have dropped the jaws and left my eyes still burning ten years or so I’m learning it’s great to venture on a beach where dreams are kept still well in reach and body parts perked like a peach have not yet turned to stubble but only shout it’s trouble when times do blot out all our dreams that we had dreamt while in our teens and what was then went unforeseen ten years ago or so. [This message has been edited by Lighthousebob (07-17-2013 11:02 AM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh my goodness...I absolutely love this.. awww..the color of dreams. I don't know, time changes thiings...but there is a sotness in those lighter shades of pale. Wonderful poem, LHB |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: They are indeed, dear Bob. This is absolutely beautiful, with its touch of melancholy, but also of acceptance. Margherita |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, I love everything about this poem Bob, from the wonderful rhymes and smooth flow, to the theme itself. Applause here, very much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Thank you so so so much Lori, Margherita, and Kit for your reading and your kind and uplifting replies. Thank you. Thank you for noticing my softer side, my melancholy and acceptance sides, and, also, my attention to form and detail sides that you've jointly discovered in my writing and, again, I do, I do appreciate each of you and each of your replies so very very much. Thank you. |
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