Open Poetry #48 |
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Perfume of Sleep |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere ![]() |
The perfume of sleep upon your morning skin pulls me closer to soft scented crevasses of you It fills my lips with longing to brush them gently against your warm flesh Your peaceful oblivion of your version of David displayed upon the bed thrills and tempts me to taste you with my tongue LGR(C)7/17/13 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Oh boy! Oh boy again. Oh boy! Sorry, Lori, my fingers did the keyboard jump and jive. Oh boy! ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Wow! Glad you liked it! Lori ![]() |
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Lady Goodman Member
since 2012-10-04
Posts 193 |
Woke ME up, too! Wow. ![]() |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thank you Lady Goodman! I appreciate you taking the time to comment. Lori ![]() |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your version of dawn interpretation surely makes your man wide awake and ready to moan YES! This is lovely and passionate and also very refreshing. ![]() Margherita |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Margherita-He is not much of a morning person...That is why I write quite a bit about watching him sleep. I don't want to wake up grumpy! LOL Lori ![]() |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this...James |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks for letting me know James! Lori ![]() |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Lori - This was an early morning Kodak moment captured in poetic heat. I could feel the lava flow rising and knew the ensuing volcanic eruption wouldn't be far behind. Whew! Good work indeed Lori. Namyh |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
{blushing)...well..um..we didn't do anything, he was just very, tempting. I get up first to fix the coffee and have some time to kill before he needs to wake up. GLad you caught my drift as I intended it. Lori ![]() |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
A nice morning tasty morsel, Lori! Enjoyed, Ms. E |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Okay, Okay EbonyGirl, maybe I took just one taste but you didn't hear that from me. ![]() Lori ![]() |
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