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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2013-07-17 08:44 AM



The perfume of sleep upon
your morning skin
pulls me closer to soft
scented crevasses of you
It fills my lips with longing
to brush them gently
against your warm flesh
Your peaceful oblivion
of your version of David
displayed upon the bed
thrills and tempts me
to taste you with my tongue
LGR(C)7/17/13


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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2013-07-17 09:11 AM


Oh boy! Oh boy again. Oh boy! Sorry, Lori, my fingers did the keyboard jump and jive. Oh boy!

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2013-07-17 09:19 AM


Wow! Glad you liked it!

Lori  

Lady Goodman
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3 posted 2013-07-17 02:12 PM


Woke ME up, too!

Wow.


Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2013-07-17 02:20 PM


Thank you Lady Goodman!
I appreciate you taking the time to comment.

  Lori  

Margherita
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5 posted 2013-07-17 02:21 PM


Your version of dawn interpretation surely makes your man wide awake and ready to moan YES!

This is lovely and passionate and also very refreshing.

Margherita

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2013-07-17 02:53 PM


Margherita-He is not much of a morning person...That is why I write quite a bit about watching him sleep. I don't want to wake up grumpy! LOL


Lori  

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2013-07-17 10:20 PM


Like this...James
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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8 posted 2013-07-18 09:02 AM


Thanks for letting me know James!


Lori  

Namyh
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9 posted 2013-07-18 03:42 PM


Lori - This was an early morning Kodak moment captured in poetic heat. I could feel the lava flow rising and knew the ensuing volcanic eruption wouldn't be far behind. Whew! Good work indeed Lori. Namyh
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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10 posted 2013-07-18 10:23 PM


{blushing)...well..um..we didn't do anything, he was just very, tempting.  I get up first to fix the coffee and have some time to kill before he needs to wake up.  GLad you caught my drift as I intended it.


Lori

ebonygirl
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11 posted 2013-07-19 06:51 AM


A nice morning tasty morsel, Lori!
Enjoyed,
Ms. E

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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12 posted 2013-07-19 07:40 AM


Okay, Okay EbonyGirl, maybe I took just one taste but you didn't hear that from me.

Lori

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