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Open Poetry #48

Come Back

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2013-07-17 07:29 AM

don't leave me alone
forever
come back and whisper in my ear
much-loved sensations
yes, please return and rake
fingernails long and deadly
if the remembrance of my body awakens
within you
surging desire and pulse-pounding blood
if you remember my waiting, feverish lips
and hot to touch skin
if your hands can almost feel they touch me
come back soon
and in the night use me
one last time

©June 11, 2013 / Jerry at Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2013-07-17 07:40 AM

Such intense longing, Jerry, you must have had sweet dreams of her. This is passionate and tender at the same time. Quite enjoyable yearnings.

Margherita

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2013-07-17 07:53 AM

That is quite an invitation! Sounds like something your dream girl couldn't refuse.
Good luck!

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2013-07-17 08:06 AM

Thanks so much, Margherita, for your continued support of my work.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2013-07-17 08:06 AM

Ahhh, Lori, let us hope not. Thanks.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2013-07-23 11:11 PM

Nice...I think I would have said "one more time"...James

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