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Open Poetry #48

I Can Understand Alone

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2013-07-16 10:32 PM

I Can Understand Alone / Finding Alone

One can never quite
understand loneliness
as well as a person
that was fulfilled
in the presence of
the person they loved
and than following the
loss of that relationship
they found themselves alone.

JamesLee
16July
2013

Finding Alone
in 3 parts...

l. Love of My Life
2. I Can Understand Alone
3. After Together

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2013-07-17 05:09 AM

Yes, that hurts, dear James, and you say it from your sensitive heart, which knows the truth.

Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-07-17 07:27 AM

Sad situation. always, James.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2013-07-17 08:55 AM

Ouch,this is getting painful and one more poem to go. Are you going to make me cry?

Lori

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2013-07-17 10:20 PM

Thank you Margherita, Jerry and Lori for the nice responses, actually I am writing this in many parts which will include a total of 11 pieces...first will be "Finding Alone" with 3 parts, and then "Moving On After Its Over" with 4 parts, and then "To Love" with 4 parts. They are all written but I didn't want to flood the board so I will spread them out...James

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