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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2013-07-16 07:00 AM

I can't explain what it is,
still, I know it is real.
It sounds like wind whistling through tree branches,
and makes your lips feel as if they've been kissed.
It has a sweetness smell,
it's taste is pleasing.
I have never seen it,
but I know if I could,
it would look just like you.

©June 4, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2013-07-16 07:50 AM

Love, love, love your love poems! They are sweet without being sappy, upbeat in a mellow thought provoking way. Obviously enjoyed!

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-07-16 07:55 AM

Many thanks, Lori, love is the key and to think all these years I fought it.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2013-07-16 08:05 AM

You were given the wrong key as a kid. It just took you a while to throw that one away and find a new one on your own.

L

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2013-07-16 08:10 AM

Yep. You got that right, Lori.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

5 posted 2013-07-16 08:30 AM

the heart just knows you know? this is pure poetry

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2013-07-16 08:32 AM

Appreciate your comment, Emma. Yes, I agree, the heart knows.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

7 posted 2013-07-17 04:46 PM

Lovely piece!
I like it very much )

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2013-07-17 04:49 PM

Thanks Gale, I appreciate your thoughts on my poem.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2013-07-17 05:23 PM

Very beautiful, Jerry. It's a special emotion that we capture in flight when the heart is open to receive.

Enjoyed this much.

Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

10 posted 2013-07-17 05:25 PM

I agree Margherita, you have to be in the right frame of mind to feel as I did when this poem was written. Thanks for dropping by.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2013-07-29 10:29 PM

Nice one...James

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