Open Poetry #48 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana ![]() |
I'm alone without gossip among me; The sun is sweet setting in the bayou, I call this living good and living free, I've burnt bridges but to myself I've been true. ©May 23, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, Jerry, this is quite compelling. Excellent expression. How many can honestly say to have remained true to themselves always? It speaks of a strong personality. Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Margherita, sometimes being true to yourself puts you in hard struggles and difficult positions, but I can say, through it all I was true to myself. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Being 'true to oneself' and forgiving life. Quite possibly the two most significant challenges?! well 'penned!' |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yep, I couldn't agree with you more, Bruce. I do appreciate you reading my little poem and commenting. Thank you. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
...and you did it your waaaaaay.... Why does that not surprise me? Enjoyed the write. Lori ![]() |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You did your Sinatra impersonation quite well, Lori, and thank you. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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