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Walter Poe
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0 posted 2013-11-13 07:51 PM


The sky sits above, it watches for my mistakes.
It prepares me to pay for a sin by a sin.
I am a fool and a brigand.
A lost soul and a wizard.
I am, now, what we always claimed to be.
Magic and the Sun.
We held and we owned the dreams.
We placed ourselves above.
Now I will pay for them rightly.
For aiming too high.
For looking up still,
Now I am old and grounded.
Now merely dreaming of the dreams I once held.
So I will prepare to fail.
As I was once loathe to do now it is my lot.
I wish we were whole once again.
A group, a team, friends.
But that is gone, it died along the way.
Now we do not talk we do not see.
The 'close' it went so far away.
I was once asked 'do I miss it'.
'I do not know' I answer
truthfully, as is not often my way,
I do no longer remember why.
I look at your faces.
those I can still see through times fog.
I find I am blind.
To what we were to who I was then
I grope for a past.
It did not glow but its lights still die.
It leaves my world dim now.
myself I am but a spectre of him.
He smiled as I do not
He loved as I can not.
He was loved as I am not.
Should I envy him.
My corporeal self.
That warmth I must have felt.
Or should I cry more crocodile tears.
Knowing the future on his shelf.
no I no longer cry.
It is not in me.
No more could a lion cry for a lamb.
No more could a God cry for a man.
I am above him now as he was once above me.
I am his shield become form.
His Nightmare from harm.
I am half a man.
Perhaps that is why I am alone
For he, whom I once was, is gone.  

Outside of a dog, a book is a man's best friend. Inside of a dog it's too dark to read.

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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
1 posted 2013-11-14 03:30 AM


i love the own side look of the poet, like a confession with wisdom and emotion, it works artfully, rhanks a lot,


yann

luminosity
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since 2005-11-18
Posts 813

2 posted 2013-11-18 03:26 PM


I like.

Life has a way of taking chunks' out of us, leaving 'less of us'
you wrote it perfectly

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