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Open Poetry #48

Feel Me

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2013-07-13 09:37 AM

Feel my warm sweet
slip softly aside you
murmuring love mumbles
as you slumber deep
Feel me answer your
bidding dream
calling me close
to caress your heart
Feel me feeling you
smiling in your sleep
LGR(C)7/13/13

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-07-13 09:39 AM

Now that is a dreamers delight, my friend. You DO know how to take the lucky man on a delicious journey.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2013-07-13 09:52 AM

Thanks Jerry!
Not to nit pick, but you refered to it as a "delichious journey". I know for a fact I did not once mention chocolate in any way, shape or form-but it is food for thought.

Lori

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

3 posted 2013-07-13 09:56 AM

Definately the stuff dreams are made of. A scintillating tease to the senses. Much enjoyed.

Michael

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2013-07-13 12:54 PM

Thanks Michael,
Woke up too early, had to go to other room and just think about it. So, of course then I had to write about it.

Lori

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2013-07-13 09:25 PM

N I C E . . .

jimmy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2013-07-14 09:25 AM

Thanks Jimmy, I appreciate your comment!

Lori

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