Open Poetry #48 |
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Healing |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere ![]() |
Things I had forgotten about healing First and foremost is time and it's ambiguous span It is painful Painful as the wound its self For indeed it is the wound its self It is growth It is learning from the dark into the light And the wanting is always on the dawning of yesterday LGR(C)7/11/13 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Getting into yourself is a sometimes very painful thing to do, Lori, I agree with you and have experienced it myself. Although no one can truly understand another's pain. All we can do is try. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I love the healing balm in your ponder-poem, Lori, the pathway being succinctly reminiscent of Plato's allegory of The Cave his "The Republic" which has fascinated me for decades. I really enjoyed wandering through your poem, from darkness into light, the poem becoming more beautiful with every line. Jerry is so extremely right in saying that none of us can ever truly understand another's pain. Owl |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Laugh or cry Heal or die it is not rocket science It may be rock science getting inside my head Always good to hear from you Jerry Lori ![]() |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Owl! Good to hear from you. Thank you for your kind words. I was hoping the last line or two would bring a smile. Lori ![]() I agree with Jerry too |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"and the wanting is always on the dawning of yesterday" Awesome line to a wonderful piece, my friend. jimmy |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
very upbeat and healing to many of us as well ![]() |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks for the awsome Jimmy! It means a lot. Lori ![]() |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Bless your heart EmmaRose, what a kind and thoughtful thing to say. Hugs! Lori ![]() |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Just gotta remember not to pick the scabs! Healing is a process for most people... sometimes a painstakingly long one. Others sometimes never heal but just learn to live through the pain. Let's hope you're one of the former. Enjoyed the read. Michael |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I like to think I'm the former...If you stop and think about it, at any given time we are all healing from something-hangnail or papercut. And there are the old wounds long since healed that still manage to give us grief from time to time. Some of my most blessed moments have come in times of dispair, reminding me of the gift of growth in hard times. Lori ![]() |
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