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Ratio To Love
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Ratio To Love |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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Sitting by this open window looking out on the windswept lane as soft breezes left after the storm blow miracles of consciousness on my face Once again I realize you've gone forever's way there is no normalized ratio to love. Memories can be the curse of happiness! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Memories are the curse of happiness, yes, I agree, but memories can also bring smiles. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yes, that's so true Jerry that's why I wrote "can be". In this case it applies......Just a little lamenting poem I guess. Thanks for the reply. true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Lovely...I have missed reading you...my fault not yours |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
lamentations at its best as your poem suggest |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
"there is no normalized ratio to love" True! Since love can not be normal itself for every time it's unique ) |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Eric, I felt every breath, emotion, experience of this sad, but beautiful gem. Owl |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Very moving blues. Lori  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
fine writing...James |
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