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Open Poetry #48

Sophia

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2013-07-06 09:10 PM

Sophia

When she says her name
it kind of hangs
onto her moist lips

when I say it
she smiles
as if she likes
to hear it.

maybe she just likes
the way I
say it
cause she knows
how much I
like her.

and she's got lots
of things to like
if you seen her
you'll agree with me...

but you don't
have to.

JamesLee
05July
2013

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

1 posted 2013-07-07 05:23 AM

A lovely poem, James!
My daughter bears the same name )

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2013-07-07 09:13 AM

I really like your ending!
The "but you don't have to." gave it an extra kicker.

Lori

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2013-07-08 10:29 AM

I like this one.
\
Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2013-07-09 10:44 PM

Thank you Gale, Lori and Juju for the nice responses...James

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