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Lady Goodman
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since 2012-10-04
Posts 193


0 posted 2013-07-04 06:05 AM


Sparkled as a diamond I

float and search the skies for signs

in the wisps of clouds' design

as glitter funnels from eyes

sacred spirals dance the sky...


I pray that I'll be recognized

forgiven, blessed and sanctified

with courage to begin again

even as the journey ends

I long to live alive again

pray, John, oh bless me innocent

and reverent of life.

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2013-07-04 06:19 AM


Deep and poignantly beautiful, dear Karen.

You have immersed here in a sacred atmosphere and the result is bound to manifest, just as you wish.

Every new day is a new beginning and we are not left alone to live despite the difficulties and to live vibrantly. You are this.

Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2013-07-04 08:05 AM


Oh, I just loved these two lines . . .
quote:
with courage to begin again
even as the journey ends

I hope all your wishes will come to pass.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
3 posted 2013-07-04 08:31 AM


Oh, Karen, your poem sparkles more than any diamond, and I just know these wonderful things shall come to pass . . . I feel it in my bones . . . you are so much worthier and more wonderful than you think!

Owl

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