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seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

0 posted 2013-07-03 11:44 PM

The sky did look most pleasing tonight.
No trees nor smog to obscure my sight.
As clouds strolled past both grey and white.
With a touch of pink woven through.

The beauty held in that vision clear.
Could just compete with one I hold dear.
Her hair so soft when held so near.
Who once told me "pink means Chloe!"

My daughter held my hand so long.
From moment one til she grew strong.
I loved her and taught her right from wrong.
But like a cloud she floated away.

So here I sit in the breath of night.
Try to catch a cloud and hold it tight.
But it is out of reach as well as sight.
My daughter, Miss Pink Means Chloe.

[This message has been edited by seraphin (07-05-2013 06:55 AM).]

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 2013-07-04 01:16 AM

Very touching. I have to believe these words will make their way to your daughter. There's too much feeling behind them for it not to be so. I can feel your ache.

Michael

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2013-07-04 01:23 AM

Very nice writing...James

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2013-07-04 07:11 AM

Yes, they do drift away sometimes never to return, but your faith is strong, I've a feeling i will reach her.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2013-07-05 02:38 AM

Sandra,

So beautiful and haunting. You really touch me with your poetry .. and I have missed you.

It's good to read you again.

Alison

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

5 posted 2013-07-05 04:02 AM

Seraphin, I don't know whether Chloe is still on Earth or not, but either way, I ache for your pain, more than you will ever know. My daughter is still on this Earth, but she cut me out of her life more than twenty years ago. That is how she wants it.

Owl

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

6 posted 2013-07-05 12:11 PM

Touching and affectionate...
I have a daughter too, and I pray for her every time I recall what a daredevil she is.

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