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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2013-06-29 03:53 AM



PROOF PERFECTION
23 June 2013

There are nanosecond-millions
of proofs
of the existence
and omnipotence
and magnificence
and fierce gentleness
and protective love,
of our Father, God,
but the greatest,
no matter who you are,
is
you.

How
on Earth
or in Heaven
or in Hell
could a person
with your complexity
of such a magnificent blend
of good and evil,
physically,
mentally,
emotionally
spiritually or with a vehement lack of spirituality,
have been created
except
by a loving,
vibrant,
challenging,
supportive
Master Father
who gives you
free will
to reject
His very existence
or hate Him because
you don’t understand
the bigger picture
and/or because
you or I or others
have created havoc
with his gift
of free will,
yet He loves us ardently still?

Owl

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Angel4aKing
Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
1 posted 2013-06-29 04:58 AM


Beautiful .... to know that God sees all and loves us still without a word patiently waiting for us to come to our senses .... until he turns us around again and again opening our eyes....loved it ...wish I could write like this....God bless you and yours...

~~~kingsangel~~~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2013-06-29 05:38 AM


Thank you, kingsangel, for the supportive beliefs and for your kind words.  

I am glad that you write the way you do.  We are all unique (another proof! - who else could have got that right, lol?) and if anyone's writing was a carbon copy of another, we would lose the delight of the diversity.

Owl

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
3 posted 2013-06-29 08:20 AM


I'm a non-believer, Owl, but I DO believe that if the world would live and conduct themselves according to the Ten Commandments there would be no wars, there would be peace.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
4 posted 2013-06-29 08:46 AM


That was infinitely gentler than I was expecting from you, Jerry, lol!  Thank you for that.  Smiles and thank you for reading and responding and for your honest comment.

Owl

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