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Open Poetry #48

Dream Reality

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2013-06-28 07:15 AM

Shifting sands
Bayou turbulence
Miles and miles from you
Still . . .
Like draping moss
Pushed by the winds of your thoughts
As you lie in bed dreaming
Of a man
You can't stop wanting
And he is there on the bayou
Dreaming his very own dreams of you
You quickly sit up in bed
Understanding he has given you
Something to remember
Bayou turbulence and draping moss
Pushed by the winds of your thoughts

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2013-06-28 09:09 AM

Your love poems are like a chocolate fix
giving the reader that feeling of love and romance. Your cyber romance has been a pleasure to witness. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-06-28 09:11 AM

My Cyber romance, Lori, has been more, much more than I could have ever envisioned. It has made me a complete person. Thank you for saying such nice words about it.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

3 posted 2013-06-28 08:36 PM

Loved it!
Kat >^..^<

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

4 posted 2013-07-02 07:38 AM

And me too )

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2013-07-02 07:57 AM

Thank you Kat and Gayle, good to see both of you here.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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