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Open Poetry #48

Our Souls' Redemption

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2013-06-23 03:58 PM

  Our Souls' Redemption

On such a night …
of ever-spinning clouds
  and stars
beneath a wondrous  moon
  unlike all others,
our finest memories and
dreams shadows-dance
the evening wind, to a
soft-moonbeam melody
and gentle twilight refrain,
through these ancient
mystic mountain forests,
as our minds and hearts
  become one
in our souls' redemption
through this new
and perfect love.

                 --- b. e. adams (6/23/13)

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-06-23 04:05 PM

Such an upbeat poem, Bruce. I missed out on the moon last night. Forgot about it before I retired for the night and slept too late this morning. Your superbly written poem helped me visualize it somewhat.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2013-06-23 05:18 PM

Way, way, way beyond beautiful, Bruce.

Owl

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2013-06-23 11:48 PM

never been quite sure ... whether 'tis a blessing or a curse to be an 'incurable Romanticist?!' ...

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