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The Wind's Song
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The Wind's Song |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa 
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THE WIND'S SONG 1 January 2001 Who will share with me the wind’s song? The rush, the hush, crescendo, diminuendo, leaf dancers painting light and shadow waves on my dark night walls, and, in the breath pauses, the baton turns to tympanic crickets, muffled little drum barks and melodic highway hum. Then the wind, the wind, the slow blow, the ebb and flow, the come and go, the wind, the wind… Who can I tell? And who will understand? Owl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, James. Owl |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
Enjoed this poem! Probably I would ) |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
Whispers in the wind Michael |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Gale. Yes, I believe you do hear the same song as I do. Smiles. Thank you, Michael, for your beautiful reply - yes, you certainly hear the wind's song too - and strangely, "whispers in the wind" is the first line of one of my poems, and the last of another completely unrelated poem of mine. Smiles. Owl |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
this wind plays like a piper in the bakground of life, drawing us in, as it conjures all kinds of thoughts in our imagination, unfortunately we may try, but we will never capture it..and that is a good thing  lovely words of a windsong your poem is |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, EmmaRose, for your beautiful and kind words. Smiles. Owl |
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