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You're Forbidden
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You're Forbidden |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
You're Forbidden, just as the fruit was for Adam & Eve Someone I must not touch, just as it was amongst the tree However the bad may be mixed in with the good For everything is never done as it always should The hunger that thrives within my thirst For someone so unlikely at times will it hurt Is there such thing as moving to fast Or not being able to hold on & lose you within my grasp The rush that came with no caution label Will I soon realize or ever be able To need someone as I have needed air The quiet that builds when your not there Such a life to live without taking a risk When in the beginning is how we came to be like this When asking whats a life worth living for While all we've ever wanted for the young is so much more You're Forbidden, yet I long for every moment spent together After all in the end, nothing will last forever Colors will fade, Leaves will fall The young grow old, then will leave us all The memories that remain forever planted in our minds As the things we once loved we do for the last time A touch that feels right, a hand to hold To wipe away the tears as they unfold You're Forbidden, then again you remain in my dreams Unlike anything I've ever experienced, someone I never could've foreseen Yet now as you exist here in my life I never want you to go with you everything feels right That you may be the one that I've been waiting for To finally start my journey, perhaps become so much more You're Forbidden, yet the war never seems to be over for me As I continue to fight until I can no longer breathe The happiness, the affection, the emotion which I desire The way you make me feel, goes beyond the warmth of a burning fire One day soon to say the words that have been at the tip of my tongue Yet they wait for another day, consuming the air through my lungs As time goes on, feelings and emotions get stronger I'm afraid perhaps soon, I may not be able to hold back any longer Patience is a word I can no longer use For that is a feeling I absolutely refuse You're Forbidden, yet my mind always strays to you You're Forbidden, however I can't help but want to see you You're Forbidden, but at this very moment all I want is to be with you & when that day arrives is when everything changes When we'll finally have what was meant to be Kate |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You have done a great job here, dear Kate. In this stream of consciousness, a dialogue with your innerself, you say things as they are. Temptation is there and what is considered forbidden, lures like a diamond between dark coal. No advice can be expressed, except maybe trying to think of the consequences of our choices.  Well written. Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Thank you Margherita! I'm glad you enjoyed! This was another one of those poems that just unfolded for me, as I had no way to stop it as it was being written! Everything just came out all at once as I'll say! I'm shocked myself as for writing it, however reading through it once again, I still like it myself! Kate |
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