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Open Poetry #48

Under a nights tale

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2013-06-05 07:22 PM

They met under a nights tale

Her shy skirt used to pass
through the cars of the falling shadows
against the bluffs of the sea

She had a small part of her breast
against the backwood of his hands
bristles of hair on his knuckles

Where the sun said shy spells
of a tale of light
where the gift of a woman's skin can be seen,
her thighs, slightly off the rise of the sun
with the covers still slightly
turned over on her right side
so a shadow slightly peeked in

With his arms touching her hair
she breathed roses into his mouth
until he could see the shower running
with her hair, damp
watching her
as if it was the first time they saw one another
on the street corner of Mulberry,
twenty years ago.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2013-06-05 08:09 PM

I love how you drape your words, the shadow light is succulent, seductive, sexy and so tastefully done.

Beautiful poem, Tomer~

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

2 posted 2013-06-08 06:40 PM

Blues-

Thank you for the compliments...I'm hapy you enjoyed. Hope you're well.

Cheers

Tomer

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