Open Poetry #48 |
the process of consideration |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I have witnessed the bronze of those bentley mornings when dawn was more than saliva on some lipstick smile and those eyes were arrows that entered my eros shirt when the exiting was less painful and not noticeable until it rained after in afterthought and I noticed the stains of wanting more than just a passing coffee house glance when there were not so many danceable songs remaining but time was not an issue one could put consideration on kind of like how leather smells when worn for the first time with just that imagined fitting and not the punishing payments ______________ daark |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
One of your best, my friend. j. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
J....thank you sir |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Oh my! Words and picture exude emotions that only you can stir. This is a sensuous car with its perfect lines of roundness ... awakening dreams. Luxury and beauty combined. Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Mar...thank you special lady |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I know I often miss the point in poetry ... and I don't think I am a covetous person ... but that car is more than sublime. And so is your poem, Daark. Ali-san |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Ali-san..thank you little one..Bentley tin is seductive as most any woman would imagine herself to be and visa versa. |
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