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Open Poetry #48

Just the Two of Them

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2013-05-29 09:08 PM

she walks to the bed
sits down
pats it with her hand
and says
how can I please you
its just past dusk
a full night ahead of them
she stands
smiles
turns back the covers
the way she is dressed
simple white silk blouse
short brown skirt
not at all what he thought she would be wearing
he expected sexy attire
but no, she wore
something simple, but oh so alluring
and he understands she will pander to him
for whatever is his kick
she'll do to please her trick

©May 28, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ The Energizer bunny was arrested and charged with battery. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2013-05-29 09:18 PM

I love your snapshots like this one. You paint the picture so well that you really don't have to say it.

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-05-29 09:20 PM

. . . no you don't, but I understand what you would say if you were of a mind to. Thank you Lori ...

~*~ The Energizer bunny was arrested and charged with battery. ~*~

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

3 posted 2013-05-30 11:19 AM

Another vivid little glimpse into the seedy realities of human nature. Enjoyed!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2013-05-30 11:28 AM

Good morning Bob, and thank you.

~*~ The Energizer bunny was arrested and charged with battery. ~*~

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

5 posted 2013-05-30 12:23 PM

chourouk
Member

since 2012-05-29

Posts 52

6 posted 2013-05-30 02:30 PM

I love the effect which you leave it because it brings the hope to my page.

May God bless you.

Chourouk

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

7 posted 2013-05-30 02:35 PM

I am very happy that you are pleased with the ending on this little poem, Chourouk, and thank you very much.

~*~ The Energizer bunny was arrested and charged with battery. ~*~

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